Internally conflicted... she was never been to touch skin-to-skin anyway, and now she's dangerous even with the gloves on.
What sort of beta feedback would you like? Grammar and spelling, plot yays and nays, character and so on? I remember when I handed off my WIP to auril that I wasn't too worried because I anticipated that she'd get too bored within the first page to continue, hahahaha!
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Date: 2009-01-10 01:54 pm (UTC)What sort of beta feedback would you like? Grammar and spelling, plot yays and nays, character and so on? I remember when I handed off my WIP to