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One of my New Years Resolutions is to write more fic. Let's start as we mean to go on, shall we?

Title: Simulation
Author: [personal profile] lyore
Rating: G
Summary: Skywalkers' have a great many talents, but flying in simulators isn't one of them. Two drabbles, one story.
Author's notes: Inspired by the discussion on this post.
Characters:Drabble One - Anakin. Drabble Two - Luke, Wedge.


Father

“Sithspit!” Anakin jabbed viciously at the simulator’s reset. Obi-Wan would chide him for his display of temper, but Anakin felt no remorse. It’s not fair. Even Obi-Wan can fly sims better than me!

The thought of his master made Anakin glance guiltily at the chrono. He and Obi-Wan were scheduled to greet a trade delegation, but in a rare display of sympathy for Anakin’s loathing of everything political, Obi-wan had declared his apprentice’s presence unnecessary.

Frustrating as pseudo-flying was, it was still infinitely better than politics. Anakin’s hands tightened on the controls. This time, I will do better.

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Son

Wedge struggled not to laugh as a deflated Luke dragged himself out of the simulator.

“I just don’t understand” Luke groaned. “It’s so easy in the air, but in the sim it’s all just random dials and dots on a screen.”

“So you’re no good in a sim – who cares? You can fly rings around the rest of us, and everyone in the squadron - and Command - knows that.”

Luke brightened slightly and Wedge clapped his friend on the shoulder. “And besides, you did beat some of the trainees!”

Luke threw his flight gloves at Wedge’s head.

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Happy New Year, everyone!

~

Date: 2008-01-01 09:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] seldear.livejournal.com
Heh. I like the fics!

And Happy New Year to you, too!

Date: 2008-01-01 02:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonshayde.livejournal.com
Drabbles? I like short fic these days.

Star Wars?

*slides on over* Halo thar..

These were funny. OMG. I miss Star Wars. I see a marathon sometime soon in my future. Plus you totally made my day by writing two drabbles, same theme, father and son. it really highlights their similarities and differences.

Wedge for the bonus :)

Date: 2008-01-01 04:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amethyste5.livejournal.com
WEDGE!!! I love Wedge, miss him dreadfully when I'm not re-reading the X-Wing books. (Only completely good books in the EU, they are perfect, as is Wedge, and Hobby is nice too)

Date: 2008-01-01 06:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] imadra-blue.livejournal.com
Ahahaha, aw! That's so adorable, with nice little character moments that fit. :D

Date: 2008-01-01 07:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deirdre-c.livejournal.com
Hee! They're both great! Happy New Year, honey! :)

Date: 2008-01-03 12:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fialleril.livejournal.com
LOL!

Yay! You wrote it! :D I love these little snippets. Especially the one with Luke and Wedge. Poor Luke... ;)

*adds to memories*

Date: 2008-01-03 04:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emavalexis.livejournal.com
Here via Jedi News, and wanted to let you know I loved these drabbles. Very in-character and fitting. :)

Date: 2008-01-03 05:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] were-lemur.livejournal.com
(via [livejournal.com profile] jedi_news)

These were both teriffic, and so telling about both Anakin and Luke. :)

Date: 2008-01-03 05:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luminations.livejournal.com
Such fun little ficlets! Great work!

Date: 2008-01-03 05:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sreya.livejournal.com
Here via [livejournal.com profile] swfanfic

I just LOVE the contrast between the drabbles - Anakin losing his temper where Luke whines a little, then laughs at himself. *huggles Luke*

Date: 2008-01-03 05:14 pm (UTC)
pronker: barnabas and angelique vibing (Default)
From: [personal profile] pronker
This time, I will do better.

All that steely determination, oooh, scary. Liked the novel idea of sims as a bridge, neat! Sending cyber-encouragement on your resolution, too.

Date: 2008-01-06 08:48 am (UTC)
sunnyskywalker: Young Beru Lars from Attack of the Clones; text "Sunnyskywalker" (Default)
From: [personal profile] sunnyskywalker
I'd been hoping you'd do something with the sims idea :D I love how you show the contrast between Anakin and Luke so beautifully here.

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